Wordsmithery, Part II

I blogged about my daughter's writings here previously.

So, how 'bout a sequel? Sounds good to me.

I stated then I wished I could write as well as she could. And I stand by that statement.

For your consideration and without further ado once more:

- I was worried because I left my school agenda at home.

- After I said farewell to my friends, I endured the long trip home.

- We raised a large crop of cornfield which is next to the pond.

- Come and see the wide and beautiful canyon.

- I escaped from the huge smoke of fire but the firemen had to save my mom's life.

- The dark mysterious giant got hurt in the morning.

- When Joe was doing his chores, he found a crack on the wall.

- It's an hour away before school ends.

- At school they had a lesson about Thanksgiving.

- At art class, we painted clay and used a needle to sew scraps together.

- My mom said "Don't write on the kitchen table."

- My ancestors were delighted when I made them a pie.

- After I ate a crispy cookie, I went to play my harmonica.

- I can't lie to my mother because she is my elder.

Of this batch, I have a few favorites I can't choose between:

- The tornado was about to hit a third grader, but everyone scurried all about.

- The heroic officer was talking with his mouth full.

- Have you heard or ever seen the impossible solar system?

............................ Ruprecht ( STOP )